Dental Copywriting

“Est” Syndrome & How to Beat It in Your Dental Content

Sometimes I can’t get-over-myself. This occasionally happens when I write proposals to promote my services to a potential client.

My first hurdle with self promotion is taking myself just seriously enough to boldly inform someone that I’m the person to get-it-done for them. Something similar happens with product and service promotions.

The “est” syndrome.

This feature-focused disease includes promotion killing words like bigg-est…fast-est…great-est. The problem with “est” words is their potential to create unhealthy – or unnecessary – comparisons.

There’s a much better focus. I’ll share that in moment.

Think about making an impression on someone. That all important first impression makes it harder to breathe, doesn’t it?

You stress about your appearance – what to wear? You stress over your first words, how firm should your handshake be, etc.

It’s all about the feature presentation. And perhaps that’s the fear source.

When you think features – everything has to fit and flow just short of “perfect,” right?

But like all lasting relationships, you eventually move past the surface appearance and engage with what’s beneath – the real person. That’s where the relationship takes off and has staying-power.

The staying-power of your products and services have more to do with the deeper benefits than surface features.

Write your dental promotional content to the benefit level.

1) Look at the product or service with fresh eyes.

Ask – what problem does this service really solve? Then think solutions.

Perhaps you’ve focused so much creative energy on the presentation (features) that you’re missing your most compelling selling points (benefits).

2) List every possible problem the product/service solves (really, all you can think of).

This list could be creative-gold for your R&D (Research & Development) processes. Whiteboard or mind-map every possible problem and solution your dental product/service engages.

Punch-up your content with these gold nuggets. Benefits connect and compel your prospect’s emotions.

3) Leverage the results of happy users/clients/patients.

When a problem is solved with one of your products/services that’s an emotional deal. No, there may not be laughter and tears (depending on what their issue is) but now you’ve won a customer…perhaps for life!

Why? Because you engaged them at an emotional level – where a dental problem, an issue, etc was causing “pain.”

You delivered a timely and useful solution to their dilemma. And they’ll talk you up because of it.

But…they won’t if you don’t give them a venue. Testimonials, case studies, survey forms are excellent venues for this kind of “love.” Leverage them.

Seeing yourself as the solution (benefits) is much more effective than comparing yourself to everyone else (features).

YOU have a voice that’s uniquely YOU.

Get over yourself. Start using it.

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What Elmer Wheeler Said That Can Enhance Your Dental Marketing Copy

As I write this post the Fourth of July holiday weekend is approaching. Soon, the familiar and annual sound of fireworks exploding overhead will symbolize how we Americans celebrate our freedom. And of course another sound will arise from BBQ grills across our grand land – the *sizzle* of hot dogs, burgers and steaks (hey…there’s always a reason to grill something during the summer season).

Referencing the word, “sizzle,” reminds me of the classic advertising line from the pioneer of persuasion, Elmer Wheeler. I discovered some marketing principles in an article highlighting his now classic book, Tested Sentences That Sell.

In fact, I’ll use his now infamous marketing phrase to lead off a list of 5 Keys to Enhancing Your Dental Sales and Marketing Copy.

*Don’t sell the steak – sell the sizzle*

First things first. Effective copywriting sells benefits and deeper benefits. Life is too short to waste yours or your prospect’s time talking…talking…talking about the product.

*Don’t write – telegraph!*

In Wheeler’s day, telegraphs were all-the-rage for sending messages. Being charged by the word meant keeping the price down by choosing your words wisely.

Saying, “Don’t write – telegraph,” Wheeler implied, “Make every word count.” He would say, “…your first 10 words are more important than the next 10,000…” and “…you have only 10 short seconds to catch your prospect’s attention.”

*Say it with flowers*

In other words, it’s not enough to make a statement about your dental business, dental products, or dental services to your prospect. You have to prove it! Say, “I love you,” and then prove it…by sending flowers (sincerely and convincingly, of course).

*Don’t ask if – ask which*

Always give your prospect a choice between something and something. Never go with a choice between something and nothing. “Would you like fries with that…?” (Something and nothing). “Large or small fries with that…?” (Something and something).

*Watch your bark!*

Wheeler had a love of dogs. He knew you could tell how a dog feels at a given moment by the way they wag their tails and by the sound of their barks.

Saying, “Watch your bark!” Wheeler’s reminding that it’s not just what you say but…how you say it. When writing promotions keep the copy conversational and engaging.

Elmer Wheeler kept is simple and to the point. He knew what we all must come to understand – there’s freedom in simplicity (or something like that).

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