dental copywriting
3 Essential Elements of Profitable Email Promotions
I was “in love.” And I couldn’t wait to get my next perfume-scented letter (hey, we were giddy teenagers…cut us some slack). Ahh…the joys of adolescent “romance.”
I remember those younger days when I anxiously waited for the US Postal vehicle to make it’s way down my street…to my mailbox!
Here’s a thought – without all the fluffy romantic stuff. Imagine…
…your client list feeling that sense of anticipation I just described when your next promotional email arrives in their inbox.
Is it possible? Yes. And there are 3 ways you can add some allure to your dental product and dental service email promotions…and enjoy profits to boot.
These are the 3 most important (and overlooked) elements of email promotions.
1–The Lead
Why? It’s where you connect with the readers (your client or potential client) and build a relationship.
I go with a *story-based* lead 90% of the time. Notice how I started this one.
Stories, current events, movies, personal life experiences are relevant and compelling. They increase the potential of your entire email being read – especially to the point of the all-important *click-through* link (more on that in another post).
2–The Transition
This keeps you from “shifting-without-the-clutch.” Like when you’re driving a vehicle with a standard (not automatic) transmission. Don’t think high-end sports car. They’re much too smooth. Think 19?? pick-up truck. The kind your grandpa had down on the farm. Remember that gear-grinding noise when the clutch wasn’t engaged when shifting.
That “gear-grinding” happens when you make sudden or disconnected transitions of thought in an email promotion.
I know this probably sounds like a lot of effort to put into a simple email. But, if you want them read and clicked-through to a product or service offer on your website/webpage – you’ll give significant thought to how you “shift” from one element to the next.
Seamless, smooth transitions!
And now…drum-roll please…the most important element of your email promotion…#3
3–The Subject Line
Most emails fail here! Compelling content, smooth transitions, a well-placed click-through link in the email body… even a strategically designed website awaiting your client’s or prospect’s arrival. They’re worthless if your subject line doesn’t persuade them to open the email.
For starters – take a look at your inbox. Critically review the subject lines of your favorite enewsletters you subscribe to and other email you receive. What compels you to open & read or delete?
Subject line wording matters. Read and learn.
And remember…
Compel (tell a story). Connect (seamless transition). Concentrate (subject line)!
How to build a relationship of trust with your dental industry clients
Want to build a relationship of trust that keeps clients/customers doing business with you again and again? This tool is regularly abused by the ill-informed (and sleazy types – you know who you are). And at the same time it’s an under-utilized marketing tool.
I’m talking about e-mail. Not the kind that jams and spams (reference earlier “sleazy types”) your inbox and that of your clients.
I’m talking about e-mail that…
…gets opened
…read
…clicked-through (links to your website, online product sales page, social media sites/pages, etc.)
…and even forwarded as a referral source to client colleagues
Question: Do you send out email? How often? Is it sent via an opt-in delivery system (the optimum delivery method – more on that in another post)? Are you measuring response?
>E-mail promotions are the hidden power of business communication.<
Here’s how:
1–Effective e-mail promotions are about building a relationship of trust
Think of each e-mail as a portion of an ongoing conversation. One that establishes an acquaintance…builds credibility…and a long-term sales source.
2–Effective e-mail promotions are conversational – not hyped up sales pitches
When I write an e-mail promotion (or any copy) I ask the question: “Would I say that sitting on a bar stool?” Do your e-mails sent to your client list pass the bar stool test?
3–Effective e-mail promotions open the door to larger service/product promotions…resources…sales pages…online content and more
Some people talk too much and say nothing in the process. Those are the conversations we avoid!
Trying to do too much in a single e-mail promotion overwhelms and dilutes your marketing approach.
Build trust through an ongoing conversation – one e-mail at a time.
Does Your Dental Marketing Content Need to Get-a-Life?
What motivates someone to purchase a product or use a service?
Think about your most recent purchase. Consider the promotion that led you to hand-over your earnings.
Freelance copywriter and author, Bob Bly introduced me to a concept in one of his articles. A colleague revealed [in his opinion] that people don’t necessarily care about the idea of being…say, a millionaire or even making six-figures.
Really – the driving force is…a certain kind of life-style…living life on their terms. Money is simply a means to an end.
Of principle, Bly adds…
“…marketers who simplistically trumpet “get rich” in their ads are making a mistake. Instead of selling the obvious benefit, they could be reaching their prospects on a deeper and more powerful level.”
Here’s an example, according to Bly. Historically, career-training institutions would focus their marketing approaches on graduates making lots of money.
One ad featured an actual student standing next to his new Jaguar. What the ad failed to mention, Bly observes, was that this particular student bought the luxury auto with money he won in a personal injury lawsuit, not with money earned as result of the institution’s training.
New ads have a different focus, he notes. They feature interviews with now gainfully employed students…but they don’t talk about money.
Instead, one of the graduates talks about the pride his kids show when they see him leave the house for work every day wearing a suit and tie. Another student reveals the rewarding overseas business trips his company sends him on. He talks excitedly about his love of travel, the new foods, the diverse cultures, and new people his career enables him to meet. He’s joined in the commercial by his mother who glows about how proud she is of her son.
Bly referred to this deeper level of marketing as “life-style promotions.” It’s the appeal to what truly drives most of us to buy products or use services. The what’s-in-it-for-me answer is in many ways a shift in HOW we live more than it is merely about having money.
The persuasive element? It’s all about lifestyle!
The key…?
>>Whatever business or service niche you are in – connect it to life<<
Here’s a couple of insights into choosing words that give *life* to your promotions. First… >Shift your marketing copy into *reverse*.
>Instead of leading – as is typical – with the product, launch your wording around the lifestyle or the lifestyle benefits your target market desires.
Listen to *life* that’s happening in-and-around your business/service and the *lives* of your customers/clients. How does your product or service impact their *lifestyle* (at any level)? When you’ve made a list…you’re ready to write your copy (before creating a product).
Next…
>>Drive your product/service *forward* with copy instead of driving your copy with the product/service.
Write a persuasive lifestyle promotion about a product/service you haven’t rolled out yet (yes, you read that correctly). When you’ve tested the promotion’s selling-appeal (by actually placing it in front of your market) and found it’s effective (meaning interest is gained…order inquiries roll-in) THEN develop the product. Risky, yes! But…now who’s in the driver’s seat?
Lifestyle appeal works in a good (or bad) economy! The promise of a different, and perhaps better, lifestyle will drive your products and services forward…profitably!
Do You Make These 2 Copywriting Mistakes?
Sometimes I do stupid stuff! I said something stupid and my timing was oh-so bad! To quote Forrest Gump (I think it was him), “Stupid is as stupid does…” (Cue flurry of comments!).
Anyway, my stupidity- foible got me thinking about what “stupid is” with marketing copy.
Here’s a short list:
All features – no benefits
Copy that’s all about the “est” – as in the “big-est”, “great-est”, “short-est” – should fluidly lead to a compelling benefit. Always? I’d stand by that statement for 99% of copywriting that’s feature heavy.
Here’s a tip: Stop before you lazily promote a widget as “the greatest…” Ask/say, “So what…?” Now start answering the “what.” Answer the “what” on as many levels as you can.” Then, you’ll be on the path to discovering some compelling benefits that could increase profit.
Too many themes in a promotion
A laser or a light bulb. What’s the difference? Both are light sources, right? A light bulb is a diffused or broadcasting light source. It illuminates an environment. A laser is a focused light source. And when aimed, a laser has the ability to cut through thick steel.
A promotion should be laser-like! Focused!
To penetrate your target market’s emotions – focus on “one” theme in your copy. Lock in like a laser beam with “one” compelling idea.
That’s it for now. I’ll keep this post brief. The more I write (today), the more I risk saying something stupid…again! :0
Get the Picture, Get More Business
A picture or an image has a sort-of superpower quality. An image transports you (in the blink of an eye) to a place you couldn’t otherwise be. As the saying goes, “A picture’s worth a thousand words…”
There’s a vital secret about copy. One that increases the odds it will be read while compelling the reader to act.
Good…no…great dental copywriting shrinks the distance between the business, product, or service and the prospective buyer/user. It’s like a picture that transports you to a place you wouldn’t otherwise be. Words have that kind of power. That is, if they are strategically chosen.
Whatever dental industry business or service you promote this principle holds true. Paint a picture with the words (give or take a thousand) used in your promotions and you’ll narrow the distance between you and a prospective buyer or client.
Words do more than explain they compel! And when they compel, someone becomes a potentially long-term client, customer, and a friend of your business.
Review your latest dental marketing copy. How much of the wording explains, in detail, the features, qualities, history, etc. of your business, product, or service? Better, does it paint a picture of the benefits someone will receive when doing business with you?
If the wording gets you an A+ in the “what” category (i.e. telling everything there is to know about whatever it is you’re promoting) and it fails in the “why” or “what’s-in-it-for-me” zone, you’ve missed a significant aspect of effective copy. Give the reader an image. Lead them to a vantage point where they can see the *benefits* of doing business with you, purchasing your product, or using your services.
Again, regardless of what you provide there’s a picture to be painted. If you want to narrow the distance between your service or product and the customer or client you must find the words to create a compelling picture…or you’ll miss waves of opportunity.
Taking the easy way out by merely sloshing a few colorful words or phrases here and there and wrapping them around a few stock photo images and calling it your “dental marketing campaign” will not get the job done! Frankly, that approach is probably frustrating an already over worked assistant who feels too much responsibility for shouldering the marketing efforts you’ve passed off to them.
Picture your dental marketing copy this way for powerful results:
**Solve a problem**
Put yourself in your client’s shoes. Get under their skin – what emotions, concerns, fears, etc. is your market experiencing? Let words do the work. Use them to create an unforgettable reminder that goes a step further – picturing how you will solve their problem.
**Answer the paramount question**
If you walk in their shoes and get inside their emotions relevant to your business you’ll be better prepared to answer the question (even before they ask) – “what’s in this product or service for me?” Imagine every prospective client saying “so what!” at the end of your spiel. And rather than being offended or taken-aback you know precisely how to answer.
**Highlight the benefits**
I know I say a lot about this (and I’ll say a ton more). But, it’s really about benefits…benefits…benefits. Again, so what…you’ve got state-of-the-art HD technology…the biggest this…or the most dependable that. If you leave the benefits to their best guesswork you miss a significant photo-op – keeping with this theme.
Another thing about pictures – when the moment passes to capture one…it may never come again. Think about it!
Why If-You-Build-It-They-Will-Come Isn’t a Good Marketing Plan
“If you build it, they will come…” Really? Will they?
Sure, it’s a good movie line (Field of Dreams) but is it a good principle for marketing your business, products, and services?
Attracting a “crowd” to your business, products, and services these days takes more than a presence. For example, marketing your dental industry services on the web or in social media is huge. But it’s more about how you’re engaging and authentically connecting with your market that attracts new business and increases your profit.
The “if-you-build-it-they-will-come” approach reminds me of the guy responsible for the design and layout of sidewalks for a soon-to-be-opened high-rise office complex.
Time came for the grand opening and there were no sidewalks! The facility foreman inquired – “When will we have sidewalks…?” The landscape foreman replied – “Give it time…I’m waiting for the crowd to tell me where to build them…” Interesting.
Here’s the wisdom of his answer. Experience had taught him that people will naturally migrate between the facilities on certain and natural paths.
Give it time and a footpath will emerge. Bingo! That’s where you pour your concrete investment! Build them too early…or where it seems normal (to you and everyone else) and they’ll perhaps rarely – if ever – be used.
(Observe this next time you’re on a corporate or college campus. Notice the sidewalks. Then notice the path worn through the grass between buildings. Get it?)
Can you rely on build-your-own-path thinking when marketing in today’s economy?
I’m talking about the kind of thinking that says, “We’ll do our own thing…we don’t have time to know who who audience is…”
Here’s the deal…
How often do you launch out with a dental marketing initiative – even worse – pulling out the worn-out marketing approaches or copywriting you’ve used over and over again believing it’ll work again…hopefully better this time than last?
If you’re not experiencing valid…eye-popping…take-it-to-the-bank returns – you’ve built a sidewalk where no one’s walking…! You’ve poured your marketing investments into something without considering the benefits or lack of them for anyone…including yourself.
And in today’s marketplace can you really afford to be wasteful with your marketing dollars?
Do this:
>>Be observant
Watch and listen. What are people saying…concerned about…looking for? How does your business, product, or service solve their problem, speak to their issue, or assist with their challenge? Now…pitch to your observations.
Remember – features attract! Benefits sell! Make sure your copywriting is filled with benefits more than it is with “look-how-great-we-are” features.
>>Develop an action-bias
Talk of corporate rescues and a government bail-out numbs us to what makes this country great – focused…diligent…hard-work! Are you acting or reacting these days?
Action creates momentum and momentum will propel you through difficulty. YOU have something to sell, promote, and deliver to your clients and potential clients. Act…now!
>>Grow resilient and resourceful
Does your business have bounce…flexibility? Can you step outside the box?
Better yet, are you pushing the borders of the box to new and different edges? If you’re saying the same-ole-thing in the same-ole-ways – no wonder people are taking different paths other than the ones to your door.
Flex and find new ways to do what you do best. Then, tell your market about it with fresh words that will benefit your them.
“If you build it they will come…” makes a great movie line. But the bigger question – can you afford to just build it?
Observe. Act on what you discover. Get resourceful. And benefit from what happens! Those paths lead to more profitable places.
Is Your Marketing Content Stealing Your Profit?
Talk of the economy depresses, bores…or empowers (for those not so inclined to believe the sky’s falling every other day). Economy themed communication typically surrounds money, investments, foreclosures, etc.
But…
There’s another realm where an economic forecast could be profitable to your dental industry services.
Being called upon as a copywriter to communicate in writing on a regular basis I’m tuned-in to the economy as well…the economy of words, that is.
When communicating – whatever the form – it’s necessary to maximize your words without minimizing your message. And most bankrupt their intended message through poor word management.
How Word Economy Adds Value to Your Dental Industry Marketing Strategy
Add the term “economy-of-words” to your dental marketing vocabulary. It’s a a fundamental principle for effective copywriting and marketing content.
In business, words add value. But the right words increase your profit and improve your bottom-line. As a professional copywriter I diligently study my craft to understand and utilize the persuasive, compelling power of words.
I know how the right words (e.g. in dental marketing) can lead to more clients, improved client relationships, and the bottom-line – increased business and sales. In an article I read by veteran copywriter, Bob Bly, he asked this question…
“What words sell best?”
Let’s apply his question:
1—Consider the copywriting/content in your dental marketing resources and/or informational products.
Think web pages, enewsletters, email promotions, brochures, product info packets, print newsletters, direct mail, ad copy, etc. Even social media content too (Twitter, Facebook, Blog). Are these a mere afterthought, “micro-waved leftovers”…or a strategic element of your business?
2—Ask yourself and those responsible for your marketing resources 3 important questions.
>Is the copywriting/content you currently use enhancing your image and improving your profit picture?
>Is it an accurate reflection of who-you-are
>Are you measuring its effectiveness?
3—Take necessary steps to improvement.
Does it need re-crafting, editing, or a total re-do? If so, get after it!
Economic decisions matter – with dollars and words!