Dental Copywriter

The Voice and your copywriting tone

The Voice is an NBC prime time television series that features musical superstars Christina Aguilera, Cee Lo Green, Blake Shelton, and Adam Levine (of Maroon Five) as judges. Each selected their team of vocalists from a parade of vocal talent. The catch – they initially listened to them sing with their backs turned to them, only focusing on the contestant’s voice.

Think about it, we listen to radio, a download, or an album in much the same way. We hear the voice without seeing the singer.

I admit, sometimes when I’m watching American Idol I’ll close my eyes as the competitor sings. Focusing on their voice instead of their presentation reveals something about their talent.

Voice connects. And it’s the starting point for effective copywriting.

Voice is the tone, attitude, or style chosen to communicate the message. It’s how you focus and evaluate your marketing content.

Is your voice clear to your target audience? Can readers hear your voice over the noise of other competitors? Does the presentation/packaging hide your voice?

And such an evaluation begs the deeper question – what IS my voice and how do I choose IT? I’ll make it easy by suggesting one voice that works.

Direct response copywriter, Paul Hollingshead, suggests…

“Imagine the person you’re writing to. Picture him or her as a friend.”

Writing to a friend is entirely different than keeping it strictly business. The error many make in the first sentence is taking on a formal…corporate voice.

Here’s how to use a friend-to-friend copywriting voice:

Be conversational.

Write like you talk. People appreciate and relate best to everyday language.

Keep it casual.

The goal of marketing is the sale. But keep in mind that people don’t like the idea of being sold. Copywriting should engage emotions.

And speaking of emotions…

Connect emotionally.

One of the fundamental rules of selling, according to Michael Masterson, is “people buy for emotional not rational reasons.” As a dental supplier…dental marketer that means people are more interested in the emotional benefits of the latest teeth whitening product than they are the “latest…greatest” features you’re promoting!

Find your voice and your market will listen!

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Can You Cut-to-the-Chase?

Working as a copywriter I’ve learned that simplicity rules. I often post about being conversational in your copywriting – whatever you’re promoting (I realize some industries require a more technical…perhaps formal approach but generally speaking, casual rules).

Akin to simplicity is not going to-the-moon-and-back trying to make your point. The USP (Unique Selling Proposition) does the trick – helping your stay on target. It answers the question, “what makes this product/service outstanding…unique…over-the-top among competitors…?”

When creating your dental marketing promotions, it’s essential that you cut-to-the-chase. It means knowing what the compelling message is.

A compelling message simply stated will do more for your promotion than driving your compelling message all over the map with useless words.

3 Ways to Create a More Compelling Marketing Message:

1) Ask yourself – “what’s the ONE-THING I must communicate?”

Clearly there are numerous facets and angles to highlight when it comes to your product or service. Too much info (TMI) will lead you away from the *big idea* you desire to communicate.

Choose ONE (big idea) and build your wording around it. You’ll be surprised how much information gets attracted by your commitment to be clear about that ultimate…unique aspect among all the others.

2) Be unafraid to leave a few-things-off-the-table.

As with conversations, copywriting means prioritizing what you intend to communicate. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoy unfettered, boundary-less moments of conversation – when you can just talk wherever the moment leads. Though…with written promotions you’ve got seconds (yes, seconds) to keep the reader engaged.

Roam down an irrelevant path and you lose attention. Write what’s essential to the moment. There are exceptions, of course. But, develop fearlessness about what didn’t get said – you’ll have your opportunity if you stay focused from the get-go.

3) Read it one more time before you’re done.

I’m not advocating the endless edit here. Trust me, I can be the *Monk* of obsessive-compulsive copywriters…fearful that one more tweak here or there will lead to perfection.

Forget perfection! Think…but not too much! Let the words cook for an hour or two…perhaps even a day, if your deadline allows.

Read it casually before you call it done. This simmering…final review might (and occasionally does) reveal a gem of an edit that will send your writing over-the-top.

There’s more to be said on this topic…but I’ll keep is simple…for now.

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Would You Say It Sitting on a Barstool?

Does your dental marketing message make sense? Is it rising above the noise in today’s marketplace?

I’m referring to the impact of your product(s), services, or ideas.

As a professional copywriter it’s essential that what I create on paper or on the monitor connects. Clients pay me for the connect-ability of my writing to their target audience and market. When it connects, people buy, use their services, make an investment, etc.

After all, the essence of marketing is connection – making the sale – however you define “sale.”

Take a look at the words used to get your dental industry service point across. Word quality is important. But consider this – so is tone, quantity, and let’s not forget delivery.

Occasionally, I’m paid to talk (nearly 30 years of speaking experience).  And I’ve discovered that writing is basically talking on paper or via the computer monitor.

Conversations, whether speeches or content on a page or screen, go one of two ways: people get bored and think – “when is this person going go shut-up…,” they turn the page, or they *click* away from the website.

Or…they stay engaged – “tell me more…I’m listening…give me more information…let’s talk again soon!”

Your marketing approaches keep the conversation flowing or they’re just another piece of paper, a website or talking-head voice. Remember how Charlie Brown’s teacher sounded in the classroom. You never heard an actual voice. All you heard when ole’ Chuck or a classmate asked a question was “wah-wah-wah-wah-wah…” Seinfeld’s George Costanza would say, “Yada…yada…yada.”

Writing requires proper voice or it’s just words (yada…yada…wah…wah…wah). For maximum impact, evaluate the words you use to market and promote your dental services, products, etc.

Here’s the big idea: keep it conversational. When writing imagine you’re sitting on a barstool in a conversation with a friend, colleague, family member, or someone you just met. You’re sitting there…it’s casual…you’re comfortable…they’re comfortable and you’re just having a chat.

Five “Barstool” Copy Tips:

1–Write like you talk.

Imagine a casual moment, sitting on a barstool. If you were telling someone about your company, product, service, or idea, how would you describe it? Would you go all technical on them? Would you use big, industry words only you and a few others understand? Would you explode into a hype-driven, sales-y tone? Or would you just talk?

2–Make an impression without trying to impress.

When the person you’re talking with leaves the conversation will they remember you more for how impressive you were or will they recall the easy-going, comfortable nature of the dialogue? Would they say, “Let’s talk again soon…” or think, “Could we do this again say…during the next solar eclipse…” The impression you make brings people back for more.

3–Let communication work for you.

The goal of marketing is the sale (the impression). Merely impressive marketing efforts may or may not achieve that goal. Given the choice of being impressive or making an impression, which would you rather have in terms of the bottom-line?

4–Dress your language less formal and more casual.

Some are more comfortable in a suit, others in jeans. There’s a time and place for both but good content is comfortable like your favorite jeans.

When writing most can’t get the image of their English teacher out of their mind (I know…thanks for reminding you). You stress over crossing all your “t’s,” dotting all your “i’s,” watching your sentence structure…and don’t eeeeven get me started on grammar.

I’m not saying “slang-it-up,” get lazy or sloppy. What works on the barstool – formal or casual? Use good judgment. What’s easily read gets remembered. And what’s remembered gets purchased, used, or applied.

5–Communicate effortlessly.

Envision Tiger Woods teeing off…Kevin Durant taking the ball to hoop or sinking a 3-pointer – effortless! The skill appears second nature, fluid. Make your writing invisible.

Be aware of how writing about your product, service, and business gets in the way of the benefits or the intended result. Remember – features entice. Benefits sell!

Give your copy and dental marketing approaches the “barstool test.” Evaluating the copy/content and applying these tips to your biz communications could be the difference between increasing or decreasing profit.

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